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Friday, October 26, 2007

Chapter 5-2

The man moved faster then she ever imagined. There was a dagger at her throat before she could finish her word. “Call them off!” His voice turned into a snarl.

“Stand down!” she motioned the guards to step away from them.

By this time the main hall was silent. Everyone was moving away from them, giving Elizabeth and the man plenty of room.

“Good,” the man continued. “Now...what were you saying about over your dead body?”

“You won't get my children!” Elizabeth grabbed the lightning bolt charm from her pocket, and threw it into the man's face.

It exploded with a huge “BOOM!!” The man stumbled backwards as the guards began to rush forwards again.

“NO!” The man screamed, and made a motion with his two hands, moving them apart with palms outward. The guards were forced to stop, held by an invisible barrier.

Elizabeth drew her dagger. “Go away from here, and never come back. You and your government can go to hell.”

“Wrong words to say, my dear.” The man's face darkened, and he made two quick motions with his hands. The first was with his right, coming toward him. The second was with his left, clenching it together.

Elizabeth was thrown to her knees, and she felt a restriction on her throat. She couldn't breath, her lungs began to burn. Her hands scrabbled uselessly at her throat, there wasn't anything there to remove. She needed air.

1 comment:

wplmom said...

Run, Elizabeth, run! Save your kids from the evil government.