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Friday, August 04, 2006

Chapter 1-1

The rabbit stood outside the door. The very large door. It waited for the calling to go inside. After a few minutes of nervous sniffing, a voice sounded from inside the door. “Come,” it rumbled.

The rabbit pushed against the door, and once it had it open, went inside.

It was an office like the ones that private eyes used to use. It had a brown desk, and a computer on it. It didn't look like the now total machinated world the Earth had become. The rabbit looked around, and found that his master was the only one in the room. That was unusual. Usually there was at least two or three other men in the office with him.

The rabbit hopped over to the front of the desk, which the man stood behind. The man spoke. “Esienhower, I call you to form.”

The rabbit started changing. It's head grew, and changed shape. It's ears shrunk to human sized. It's body expanded and lengthened. It took a minute, but the rabbit had changed into a man.

He was in his twenties. His face was pale, and his eyes were black. His hair was long and ginger colored. It went down his back, almost to legs. He had brown clothes on, shorts and a teeshirt, although it was chilly in the room.

He shivered slightly, although he tried not to. He looked up at the man at the back of the desk. The man was a full foot above him, and he had the air of command around him. His face was dark, and his eyes had no pupils. They were totally white, while his hair, on the other hand, was short, and totally black.

He spoke. “I do hope you know that I am very displeased. I expected your spying skills to be a lot better then that.” He paused, and said, almost like in a trance, “It's a pity. You would have been a valuable asset.”

“Pardon, master?” asked the rabbit-man.

“Never mind,” the master snapped. “All that matters is that you failed, and that now you shall pay the consequences.”

The rabbit-man threw himself on the ground in front on the desk. “No, master,” he sobbed. “Don't.”

“It's too late for that Esienhower. It's too late.” He pulled out an old fashioned pistol, and he cocked it.

Esienhower scrambled for cover, and made it under a table. The first shot slammed into the table, and it broke on top of Esienhower, and he was now reopened to the mans shots. Esienhower tried to make it to the door, but he was too slow. Another shot sounded, and he now lay dead on the floor of the office.

The master called, “Kehiegh and Lehr, get in here.” Two bears lumbered in, barely able to fit in the office. “Get rid of this trash,” said the master.

“Yes master,” one of them rumbled. It picked up the corpse, and went out. The other saluted with one paw. “What is thy bidding, master?”

The master stroked his chin, apparently not noticing there was no beard. “Go fetch Gower. He'll do. And replace that table.” With that said, he sat down in his chair, and activated his computer.

The bear left the room, leaving the man all alone.

He sighed. “Time for my medication.” He went to a cabnet off to the side, and took out a teaspoon. He filled it with blood red liquid, and gulped it down.

He then dove to the middle of the room as he began to change. He went through a transformation, and turned into a werewolf. It lay on the ground, and smiled. It wasn't a pretty sight.


*Last edited 8/7/06, edited 1 time total*

3 comments:

82jp said...

Is the werewolf going to eat the dead rabbit-man? I hope so! And make it a Star Wars story!! :)
Good job so far...

82jp said...

Is the werewolf going to eat the dead rabbit-man? I hope so!! And make it a Star Wars story!! Good job so far...

jckwik said...

Do I have to quote it to say, "You didn't read it close enough."?